Carnival
Carnival

Ron Sanders

Reviewed by Sabrina Williams

As Ron Sanders’ complicated novel opens in 1967, three adolescent friends are heading out on a journey of self-discovery, traveling by bike to the ultimate hippie commune in San Francisco: Haight-Ashbury. It’s the “Summer of Love” and Kevin, Mike, and Eddie are teenagers determined to join the Revolution and experience the ultimate freedom one can only know through total acceptance and the philosophical epiphanies found through lots of mind-altering drugs.

I can’t say Carnival is an easy read. It will take a lot of commitment. For the first hundred or so pages, it seems like the boys are on a never ending cycle of ride, eat, smoke pot, sleep, repeat. Perhaps this is the opportunity for the reader to familiarize themselves and connect with the main characters, but it becomes pretty monotonous. It requires some dedication to stick it through. The novel has the directionless meandering qualities of Hunter S. Thompson’s Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, sans humor.

The protagonist, Kevin, is continuously tormented from the beginning. He wants nothing more than to be accepted, but everyone from his abusive father to his travel companion, Mike, and the characters they meet along the way insist on deriding the boy for his every ineptitude. His only supporter is his best friend, Eddie. Kevin is overweight, with glasses and a frizzy mop of curls. His key redeeming quality seems to be his ability to score weed at every turn, for which his companions are eternally grateful until the supply dwindles. 

Despite Kevin’s misfit status, it is difficult to feel sorry for him as one would normally react to such a bullied character. He is not a likeable person, and his frightening seizure-like psychotic episodes only serve to make him more unreachable. Even his first experiences of love do little to evoke sympathy in the reader. 

I’m not sure if Sanders intended for Kevin to be a relatable character. In fact, I’m not sure what Sanders intentions for the entire novel are meant to be. Perhaps he wants the reader to draw their own conclusions, or perhaps he was aiming to promote the nihilism apparent in Thompson’s work. Just when you think you have a grasp on the message, Sanders jerks the storyline in a different direction. The ending doesn’t relate to any of the philosophies explored throughout the story, and it’s not clear if it is meant to be taken literally or metaphorically. Maybe that’s ultimately the reader’s decision. 

Carnival
explores some of the prominent tenets of the sixties, which I find fascinating. However, after much contemplation, I’m still not sure how I feel about the novel. I think one of the main deterrents for me is that Sanders shows the destructive side of every lifestyle encountered, and I much more prefer the “all-encompassing innocence” outlook of the hippie movement. Attack society and consumerism all you please, but leave my peace loving hippies alone. And maybe that’s exactly the perspective that will make Carnival an appealing read to another person: the unabashed honesty. Either way, it’s not a novel that will be easily digested in one sitting.
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